Hi, Georgie. I've read the (actual) story, and I agree with what Sandi and other people have said here. I think part of the low read ratio is because the long drag of texts can be difficult to read. I think you can also maximize the use of Medium's formatting features such as pull quotes, highlights, hyperlinks, using bold/italic, and even section breaks. Over all, besides the formatting, it was a great read. Keep up the good work! :)

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