Strictly speaking, this long-ass sentence- I mean, this highlighted sentence is very on point! This is the exact reason I have to highlight at least every 2 sentences of your story, Srini. Seriously, I think your highlighting habit is contagious. Now as a regular reader of yours, I can't help but be prepared to highlight every sentence that has already been highlighted from other people in your writing (pardon, this lady is almost always late.)
I'm not complaining, though. It only proves how much remarkable your writing is!